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Old 03-12-2015, 08:25 PM   #1
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[electronic dance music yo] Patient Swim - ongrid fweng

helloo

i nearly didnt make this track cause its too poppy but now i have. i wacked this arrangement up and it could do with some compressors and other effects and some mixing but i need to know: what is this missing? feels like its good but soo wrong at the same time. feels like it has really shitty production values which is probably just a simple case of it having really shitty production values

what do you reckon guys? any advice much appreciated as always

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Old 03-12-2015, 08:36 PM   #2
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Re: [electronic dance music yo] Patient Swim - ongrid fweng

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helloo

i nearly didnt make this track cause its too poppy but now i have. i wacked this arrangement up and it could do with some compressors and other effects and some mixing but i need to know: what is this missing? feels like its good but soo wrong at the same time. feels like it has really shitty production values which is probably just a simple case of it having really shitty production values

what do you reckon guys? any advice much appreciated as always

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Has some really nice sounds, is that a can of coke opening? i think some of the high end eq needs a tad bit of work so it doesn't feel like you just took off on a plane and your ear is going to explode, but i will let you off as you said your ears are bust.

so yeah edm yo,


NEEDZ MOR SOSAGE FATTINER AND EQ EVRYFIN SO IT ALL DOES A RED ONE, THEN ADD 5 LIMITAS AND DEN SOME SUND GOODIZERS AND A WUB, FINIS BY PUTIN A DONK ON IT,

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Old 03-12-2015, 08:43 PM   #3
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Has some really nice sounds, is that a can of coke opening? i think some of the high end eq needs a tad bit of work so it doesn't feel like you just took off on a plane and your ear is going to explode, but i will let you off as you said your ears are bust.

so yeah edm yo,


NEEDZ MOR SOSAGE FATTINER AND EQ EVRYFIN SO IT ALL DOES A RED ONE, THEN ADD 5 LIMITAS AND DEN SOME SUND GOODIZERS AND A WUB, FINIS BY PUTIN A DONK ON IT,
hey man, i did a naughty and wapped a thing on the master that minged the high end right before i rendered it out. i really do have shot ears atm and shouldve just left it. no coke opening, most of the sounds used for hats and shiz i made with my mouth i think.

no idea what to do with this

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Old 05-12-2015, 01:00 AM   #4
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Re: [electronic dance music yo] Patient Swim - ongrid fweng

ive worked a few things out

i think its too much of 'add things in bit by bit, take things away gradually' arrangement wise

it has no proper definable peak/climax despite all my efforts.

it only goes to the alternate bit once and its right near the start

what do you think>??

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Old 07-12-2015, 08:32 PM   #5
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Re: [electronic dance music yo] Patient Swim - ongrid fweng

im just gonna have to leave this one long term and maybe use it much later when ive ran out of inspiration

last call for any opinions i really dont know what this is

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