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Old 05-19-2017, 06:31 AM   #1
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[Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

This is the latest song that I'm working on. I'm thinking about cutting out some parts. Either that or enhanced them to add to the groovy-ness of the song.

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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

This is really great. If I'm gonna be overly critical I would say beats sounds dry, probably coz of snare for this kind of melodic background.
I like this one dude, could listen to it in the background while gaming.

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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Well done mate nice track you got over there its has nice vibe and helps to relax
The claps you used at the begining sound a bit dry try to add reverb for them i reccomend vahala room for that
But good job any way
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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

that is some type of EDM style,

it's good i'm just not sure what in the song is supposed to really stand out to me..
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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Interesting sound man. I can groove to it. If I had to recommend something it would be to occasionally add a drum break to give the beat a little bit of breathing room, and make it have a little extra bounce. Overall I enjoyed it.
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Old 05-23-2017, 06:53 AM   #6
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This is really great. If I'm gonna be overly critical I would say beats sounds dry, probably coz of snare for this kind of melodic background.
I like this one dude, could listen to it in the background while gaming.
Dry as in it needs more efx and eq?

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Interesting sound man. I can groove to it. If I had to recommend something it would be to occasionally add a drum break to give the beat a little bit of breathing room, and make it have a little extra bounce. Overall I enjoyed it.
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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Sounds good. I feel like when that arp isn't playing the top end of the mix is a little lacking and could be filled out a bit. Nothing dramatic but maybe you can try adding some "Ear Candy" plucks? By that mean some sort of high plucks that don't really stand out in the mix but are there to fill it out.

Then again I'm listening on ear buds so I might be out to lunch but the rest of the mix sounds super clean. I really like your hats and the percussion in general.

Great track. Reminds me of some curious blend of tropical house and like, early '00s trance!

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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

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Dry as in it needs more efx and eq?
Maybe its just my taste. They sounded to crisp and clean to me. Probably touch of reverb somewhere and lower the eq on some mayor parts where you lifted it up possibly in your equilizer, example snare.

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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Nice clean musical track. Certainly not breaks. But as you say ging to break it up etc.

Get some glitching and modulation effects on your instruments.
Grunge up the drums, overdrive, glitch and edits.

AS is nice track, just flows in the background. Needs some elements of nice dirty nasty breakage.

As is more soundtrack and easy listening progressive electronica which is not a bad thing.

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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Love the progressive nature of the track, a lot of really cool intertwining melodies to give a great overall feel! The melodies and the arps sound really great!

Like a few people I mentioned I think the drums might not be the strongest part of the track. My issue is not so much with sequencing itself but more the way they sound. I'm thinking the samples might sound a bit generic and the drums could use some bus compression to help them move together a bit more. The Hi-hat is a bit harsh as well (weirdly enough de-essing sometimes helps). I really like the grooves though and I think the composition fits the track well. I'm sure a little more mixing could help them stand out!

Overall, track sounds great, would just keep at it on the drums a bit.

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Old 05-24-2017, 03:31 PM   #12
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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Made some changes based on some of the feedback here. Let me know if the return to the into at the end makes any sense or connects well. Thanks!

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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Much better. Drums have more bite and prescence. Nice work.
Top end/volume on drums is a tad high on my rig, sounds like a little to much harmonics going on. But that is hyper critical. Much better.

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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Really great. I forgot what I was listening to. Definitely synth wave at times. I thought of "miami nights"

nice job.

Only listened to revised btw.
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Old 05-25-2017, 05:56 AM   #15
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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Okay made a 2nd revision and added a pluck chord progression at the 2:47 mark to make the drop fuller. It doesn't sound as clean so let me know if I should revert back or not.

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Re: [Progressive Breaks] Kyrpto - Dream's Horizon

Loving the changes to the track, the synth around 1:25 works a lot better than the heavy one you had before. the drums also sound much tighter and alive!

One little thing you could do to emphasize the drop at 2:50 is automate the level of all your reverbs and send effects down to create a pre-drop void kind of thing. Might add some extra energy for when everything comes back in!
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Old 06-07-2017, 03:55 AM   #17
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Song is mastered and completed!

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Song is mastered and completed!
Great job on the final version, really loving it! Great to hear someone who was able to take constructive criticism and use it to perfect his track, it's not an easy skill to learn!

Great job on the track anyhow, looking forward to your future stuff
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Great job on the final version, really loving it! Great to hear someone who was able to take constructive criticism and use it to perfect his track, it's not an easy skill to learn!

Great job on the track anyhow, looking forward to your future stuff
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