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Old 12-05-2017, 07:16 PM   #1
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[Disco House] - Funk Partie - Music and Lights

Hey all.

This is another disco house track we have been working on.

It will be on our up and coming album 'Discology' which will be released soon.


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Old 15-05-2017, 03:18 PM   #2
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Re: [Disco House] - Funk Partie - Music and Lights

Changed this about a bit now and have cut about 40 secs off.

Still a WIP tbh...


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Old 17-05-2017, 07:00 PM   #3
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Re: [Disco House] - Funk Partie - Music and Lights

OK..I'm going to apologize up front for what I'm going to say and draw your attention to the fact that the following is based mostly on my "first reactions"..and that I get that this is your baby and you can do whatever the hell you want to do with it..it's your call..OK?

Right..with that said, I'm going to jump right in and say this track needs a lot of attention if you didn't want it to sound like it currently does. There's a little too much low end going on, which works fine on other tracks, but it seems to not work so good on this one.

In short, it's giving it a muddy sound..like you mixed it in mono and forgot to turn it back to stereo when you were done..and it sounds like it's smothering everything else in the mix..you have to hang in there for nearly 2 full minutes before there's any sign of some stereophonic clarity taking hold in the mix, which isn't that good, as it gives the impression you don't know how to mix!

Now I know that's shite, as I've also listened to the track in your sig file "Expression", which kicks the living crap out of this one you've posted here..seriously.

My honest suggestion / opinion would be to go back to the start and plan this mix out again..carefully. You need to play around with the gain on each element in the mix in order to get a tighter mix that sounds clearer, which is going to entail you taking a look at that low end.

It might just be that you need to EQ everything else and give the bass it's own room in the track..or, conversely, you might need to trim the bass back a little..it all depends how the other parts of the mix act as you apply what you do.

On a more positive note, I really liked what you are trying to do with this track, though..and I'd love to hear it if you can get a clean final mix down and posted up here.

Last word: don't give up on this..you can and should make this the great track that it currently has the potential to be.

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Old 18-05-2017, 12:32 PM   #4
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Re: [Disco House] - Funk Partie - Music and Lights

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OK..I'm going to apologize up front for what I'm going to say and draw your attention to the fact that the following is based mostly on my "first reactions"..and that I get that this is your baby and you can do whatever the hell you want to do with it..it's your call..OK?

Right..with that said, I'm going to jump right in and say this track needs a lot of attention if you didn't want it to sound like it currently does. There's a little too much low end going on, which works fine on other tracks, but it seems to not work so good on this one.

In short, it's giving it a muddy sound..like you mixed it in mono and forgot to turn it back to stereo when you were done..and it sounds like it's smothering everything else in the mix..you have to hang in there for nearly 2 full minutes before there's any sign of some stereophonic clarity taking hold in the mix, which isn't that good, as it gives the impression you don't know how to mix!

Now I know that's shite, as I've also listened to the track in your sig file "Expression", which kicks the living crap out of this one you've posted here..seriously.

My honest suggestion / opinion would be to go back to the start and plan this mix out again..carefully. You need to play around with the gain on each element in the mix in order to get a tighter mix that sounds clearer, which is going to entail you taking a look at that low end.

It might just be that you need to EQ everything else and give the bass it's own room in the track..or, conversely, you might need to trim the bass back a little..it all depends how the other parts of the mix act as you apply what you do.

On a more positive note, I really liked what you are trying to do with this track, though..and I'd love to hear it if you can get a clean final mix down and posted up here.

Last word: don't give up on this..you can and should make this the great track that it currently has the potential to be.
Hey A.M, no need to apologise at all as that is some very helpful and detailed feedback.

TBH this is still very much a WIP as it was only started a week and a half ago and hasn't been through any real mastering stages yet.

I have done a bit morer work on it now and my mate and fellow Funk Partie member will be around tomorrow so we shall take a look back here and try and apply some changes.

I'm glad you liked Expression, that's just me under my Entox name...

Keep an eye up for an updated version soon...


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Old 18-05-2017, 04:46 PM   #5
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Re: [Disco House] - Funk Partie - Music and Lights

I find your track interesting. Retro

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Old 19-05-2017, 03:10 PM   #6
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Cheers man. We are going for the retro type sound so thanks for the listening...

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Old 20-05-2017, 07:03 PM   #7
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Re: [Disco House] - Funk Partie - Music and Lights

I dig the track. Mixing wise I think the mids and highs need more clarity. The Bass hits like at 2:27 are very loud. Also I feel it lacks stereo width and space (reverb)

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Old 21-05-2017, 09:19 PM   #8
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I dig the track. Mixing wise I think the mids and highs need more clarity. The Bass hits like at 2:27 are very loud. Also I feel it lacks stereo width and space (reverb)

Very cool track
Thanks man.

I will hopefully have an update on this track by the end if the month.

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Old 22-05-2017, 04:43 PM   #9
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Re: [Disco House] - Funk Partie - Music and Lights

it is ok, i think it needs another section, something with a beat the vocals repeat too many times..

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Old 22-05-2017, 07:30 PM   #10
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it is ok, i think it needs another section, something with a beat the vocals repeat too many times..
Hey man. I totally agree about the vocal.

We are in the process of changing this so update coming soon.l

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