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Old 28-04-2017, 01:44 PM   #1
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Re: [Braindance,Acid,IDM] Vibe Origin - Dark Pleasure

This is a cool enough track..but the discordant keys didn't work for me and it seemed to develop a bit of a repetitive feel after 3 minutes or so. You might want to rethink this and jazz things up a little, by adding in some sort of counter melody or other elements that draws the listener in and keeps their attention right to the end.

Basically, take a look at how you've structured this track, as you might be able to change things enough just by playing around with the spacing of mix in general.

In short, nice track..displaying so really solid mixing skills, it just needs a little more work to life it up to the next level. All of which is MY own opinion thoughts, so please feel free to take any/all or none of it on board.

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Old 29-04-2017, 01:04 PM   #3
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Re: [Braindance,Acid,IDM] Vibe Origin - Dark Pleasure

Thanks for your extended review. I wanted to keep it simple and a bit repetitive, though it isn't absolutely repetitive in my opinion. There are some parts that constantly change when comes to arrangement. I actually like the idea of repeating a certain loop of melody which I am decided on. I give it some variation or suspense from time to time to break the pace a little bit.
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Thanks for your extended review. I wanted to keep it simple and a bit repetitive, though it isn't absolutely repetitive in my opinion. There are some parts that constantly change when comes to arrangement. I actually like the idea of repeating a certain loop of melody which I am decided on. I give it some variation or suspense from time to time to break the pace a little bit.

Cool..well if you're happy with it, then that's all that matter.

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Old 30-04-2017, 01:30 PM   #5
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Re: [Braindance,Acid,IDM] Vibe Origin - Dark Pleasure

Cute little track you got there. I do agree that it started to feel a touch repetitive around the three minute mark. My favorite part was the empty bit in the intro... You could maybe play with that if you wanted to do something to the overall arrangement, and do something really whacky with the automation, like have it detune even more and explode outwards into the stereo. (These are just ideas, do what you want )

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Cute little track you got there. I do agree that it started to feel a touch repetitive around the three minute mark. My favorite part was the empty bit in the intro... You could maybe play with that if you wanted to do something to the overall arrangement, and do something really whacky with the automation, like have it detune even more and explode outwards into the stereo. (These are just ideas, do what you want )
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Re: [Braindance,Acid,IDM] Vibe Origin - Dark Pleasure

Nice track, I like the clean straightforward mix, lovely melodies which is what acid is all about, right?! Around the 1:20 mark the bass starts doing something different but it gets lost in the mix a little bit for me, I also would quite like if you dropped a few instruments out every now and then, I don't have a problem with the length personally but I think to keep it this length you might want to mess around with the arrangement a little bit.

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Re: [Braindance,Acid,IDM] Vibe Origin - Dark Pleasure

Level of detuning is a bit much. Sounds palettes are fine, though the percussion palettes are a bit weak. Waiting for this to go somewhere melodically. Progression is there but a bit thin. Too repetitive. This really needs some heavier melodic progression to support that heavy detuning. Was hard to make it to the end unfortunately. Listening on Yamaha HS8s and the Mix sounds fine.
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Re: [Braindance,Acid,IDM] Vibe Origin - Dark Pleasure

Same here as for the other track for me... Too steady, uniform and random tootling. And a generic preset beat pattern.
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Re: [Braindance,Acid,IDM] Vibe Origin - Dark Pleasure

Hey,

I feel that the mix is quite busy at some points (example: 1:24 it is not so easy to hear all the elements, some of the drums specially the cymbals and claps. I would try to give some space to the claps and cymbals by EQ the synths, maybe a bit of side chaining too) and the synths are a bit too loud (of course it is personal)

The track is really nice, some more presence and punch on the drums would make it top

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