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Old 28-02-2018, 11:16 AM   #1
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[electronic]xvf-the top salami

So I tried making a flying lotus type beat with a combination of midi keyboard and sequencing at different tempos, using such tempos like 156.018 bpm and this is the result, also sorta hit a brickwall with this creatively so anyways here


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Old 28-02-2018, 10:50 PM   #2
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Re: [electronic]xvf-the top salami

If I could I would make it to loop until 1:23. It creates a really nice feeling, instantly felt in love and started reading stuff with this on the background. Whatever happened after 1:23, killed the vibe (

I loved it, until I didn't anymore. But its okay, I'll just play it from the beginning again
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Old 28-02-2018, 11:57 PM   #3
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If I could I would make it to loop until 1:23. It creates a really nice feeling, instantly felt in love and started reading stuff with this on the background. Whatever happened after 1:23, killed the vibe (

I loved it, until I didn't anymore. But its okay, I'll just play it from the beginning again
thank you...i was considering starting over from scratch, being that I tried to make an old unused sample that I made work but apparently it didn't i'll delete some of the track elements that pop up later on and start over.

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Old 01-03-2018, 12:28 AM   #4
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Re: [electronic]xvf-the top salami

I really enjoyed the second section actually. I think its interesting contrast between the dark chaotic foley rythms beside the distorted calming ambience. its definitely not music to listen to while you're trying to focus on other stuff though, and ultimately I think it could be cleaned up a little bit, but overall it was an interesting thought
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Old 01-03-2018, 03:14 AM   #5
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I really enjoyed the second section actually. I think its interesting contrast between the dark chaotic foley rythms beside the distorted calming ambience. its definitely not music to listen to while you're trying to focus on other stuff though, and ultimately I think it could be cleaned up a little bit, but overall it was an interesting thought
yea the second section is a hot mess, I kinda just forced it together being that I didn't want the track to get too repetitive. The other version of this sounded like mud all I could come up with were sine wave layers, it was too repetitive, i'm not sure don't know whether I should go call and response or emulate jazz with this

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Old 03-03-2018, 01:42 PM   #6
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Old 03-03-2018, 08:31 PM   #7
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Re: [electronic]xvf-the top salami

Trying to bite on my fav. musician? Here comes harsh critique Well acutally it doesn't, was kidding. The kick needs to lead the other elements, I'd like to hear it more present in the mix. The rythym of the kick seems like "mmmhmm" was its influence A thing to add: the little elements of ambience like those metal objects etc. it's good to have them very wide on both sides so that they don't interfere. The mix needs to bring the lower parts more present but then, the main pad is superb.

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Re: [electronic]xvf-the top salami

Did not like drums during intro though I liked the chord progression. When it starts to wake up I liked the drums more but they still sound a bit weak. Rhythms good, just not delivery. Chord prog good.

A minute or so in I was getting desperate for a sustained bass note just to beat the shit out of my ears, it might have been cracking awesome.

Apologies if missing the point, I avoided explanations and just hit play without reading much anything. I was waiting for this to go somewhere and it kinda just stopped before building up to much. Thing is though despite the crits I felt it could go on a journey, it just wasn't allowed.

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Old 04-03-2018, 09:07 AM   #9
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Did not like drums during intro though I liked the chord progression. When it starts to wake up I liked the drums more but they still sound a bit weak. Rhythms good, just not delivery. Chord prog good.

A minute or so in I was getting desperate for a sustained bass note just to beat the shit out of my ears, it might have been cracking awesome.

Apologies if missing the point, I avoided explanations and just hit play without reading much anything. I was waiting for this to go somewhere and it kinda just stopped before building up to much. Thing is though despite the crits I felt it could go on a journey, it just wasn't allowed.
thank you for your critique/feedback , tbh I was kinda stumped with this one

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