[In Flames Worship] Agent Slimepunk - Into The Flaming Fire
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Old 13-04-2018, 07:17 PM   #1
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Old 13-04-2018, 07:48 PM   #2
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Re: [In Flames Worship] Agent Slimepunk - Into The Flaming Fire

Opening riff is fucking sick man! I'm sure you are anticipating this already, but it despritatly needs vocals. Love the riffs and the arrangement however.

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Old 15-04-2018, 08:35 PM   #3
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Re: [In Flames Worship] Agent Slimepunk - Into The Flaming Fire

bruh! is this stock/found drums again?!? Patterns, placement, and choices are all well selected at every phrase!

I agree that the melody is which is sprinkled throughout the record is on point! Also the split harmonies between guitars really sits well.

The run that happens at or around: 1:29 is a bit feint, and could go up a hair imo.

Was wondering when you be back with another one!
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Old 15-04-2018, 10:51 PM   #4
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Re: [In Flames Worship] Agent Slimepunk - Into The Flaming Fire

Hell yeah, you seem to be back on track. There were some missteps in your previous metal demos mostly related to composition but this is basically a throwback to that good ol’ S/T times but with “it’s 2018 already” twist. It works, guitars are mixed very well and drums sound cool too. Entire composition rules. I would like to hear pieces like that are a bit longer, maybe bring some intro to metal riffs or some weird guitar resample layer with effects fading in/out from time to time. Just because there’s no vox section it kind of feels weird so instead you can add something that could glue everything together and bring some cool overall theme if you continue with this style for an EP, why not. I’m not saying it’s not good already but it can be even better. And then it can be even better if you send me stems.

Keep working on same process of writing and producing, it works so don't fix it, at least not yet.

also, I read track title as Into a Flaming Flames by Agent Arson.

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Old 15-04-2018, 11:30 PM   #5
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Re: [In Flames Worship] Agent Slimepunk - Into The Flaming Fire

I guess I'll be the outlier and say while the riffs themselves sound good, I thought as a song it was really boring. It's got a couple of cool but similar riffs that you beat to death for three minutes. There's zero dynamics and even the riffs are really just variations on the same theme. While some vocals might break up the monotony, I don't think they'd turn this into a song I'd want to listen to.

What I'd do, were I you, is take some of these cool riffs and combine them with some of the other cool riffs you've posted and make an entire song that has actual changes and dynamics and parts that aren't so similar. You seem to write a thing, and then change it a bit and call that another thing, and just do those similar things in a row and call it done. Taking the best parts from the various things you've posted and figuring out how they work together seems like a great way to make something varied and interesting and non-boring.

I do think the drums are really on point and your mix is great, as is your playing. The song itself isn't horrible, I just think it could be a lot more interesting.

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Re: [In Flames Worship] Agent Slimepunk - Into The Flaming Fire

Great sound.

I agree with Berg to a point - there's some conventional progressions here which weaken the overall work. I don't think it would take much to tip it over into full-on awesome.

I did like the title, "Flaming Fire" made me giggle a bit and suits the general over-the-topness of a lot of metal/rock tropes.

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