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Old 19-01-2018, 11:14 PM   #1
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[idm/bass music] NOWFEEL-Tebenasu WIP

Hey all....looking for feedback on the chune , don't have my usual friend who I bounce ideas off of. Wondering how the composition is sitting...does it flow, is it too busy etc. any help is very much appreciated

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Old 20-01-2018, 12:16 AM   #2
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Re: [idm/bass music] NOWFEEL-Tebenasu WIP

I think this is great!

Drop me a line when it's complete, out, released or whatever you end up doing with it. Would play this in one of my chilled DJ sets for sure.
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Old 22-01-2018, 07:03 PM   #3
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Great tune. It would be cool pop song with lyrics. And awesome sleepy frog btw.
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Old 22-01-2018, 09:36 PM   #4
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Sounds great on my headphones I would say it is finished. On the one hand, it is oldschool and reminds me really good electronic from '00s, on the other - it sounds fresh and is well produced. Really pleasant listen.
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Old 23-01-2018, 03:48 AM   #5
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Re: [idm/bass music] NOWFEEL-Tebenasu WIP

Thanks for listens and the feedback idm peeps I updated the song. minor changes to the first drop, tried to increase tension in the break down/build up to the climax, and brightened up the climax and outro

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Old 05-02-2018, 05:11 PM   #6
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Re: [idm/bass music] NOWFEEL-Tebenasu WIP

The contrast of that warm bass against the vocal samples sounds so interesting. I can't say I've heard many tracks like this before.
The transitions are all on point. The song goes where my mind wants it to. Not too unexpected ever, but I wouldn't want it to be.

The drop out / open space bridge is really atmospheric. I love the vocal processing.

The drum fill is sweet too. If you were at all on the fence about it, keep it

I don't have much to criticize here. I try and point out some negatives in every track, but this sounds really good to me, especially in terms of raw composition. You could probably polish some of the sounds a bit, but that's all up to you.

Great work, excited to hear what you come out with next.
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Old 06-02-2018, 09:05 PM   #7
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The contrast of that warm bass against the vocal samples sounds so interesting. I can't say I've heard many tracks like this before.
The transitions are all on point. The song goes where my mind wants it to. Not too unexpected ever, but I wouldn't want it to be.

The drop out / open space bridge is really atmospheric. I love the vocal processing.

The drum fill is sweet too. If you were at all on the fence about it, keep it

I don't have much to criticize here. I try and point out some negatives in every track, but this sounds really good to me, especially in terms of raw composition. You could probably polish some of the sounds a bit, but that's all up to you.

Great work, excited to hear what you come out with next.
Thanks for all the kind words Im glad you enjoyed the track! I haven,t mixed or mastered it yet, but it will be on my new album which ill post here when its done

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Old 06-02-2018, 11:26 PM   #8
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I think its nice. You could create an atmosphere - that's very important in IDM. And in any music in general.
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Old 08-02-2018, 03:23 AM   #9
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Re: [idm/bass music] NOWFEEL-Tebenasu WIP

Listened to the first version which I thought was absolutely GREAT. Now listening to the second. I think you are striking the perfect balance between sparse and full. Also there is great melody throughout and passages that flow through the percussive, the harmony, and the melody. I have zero complaints.
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Old 08-02-2018, 05:14 PM   #10
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Listened to the first version which I thought was absolutely GREAT. Now listening to the second. I think you are striking the perfect balance between sparse and full. Also there is great melody throughout and passages that flow through the percussive, the harmony, and the melody. I have zero complaints.
Thanks for listening and the very nice words. pls enjoy this as a token of my appreciation. Loving what im hearing on your soundcloud

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Old 23-03-2018, 09:18 PM   #11
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Hey all....looking for feedback on the chune , don't have my usual friend who I bounce ideas off of. Wondering how the composition is sitting...does it flow, is it too busy etc. any help is very much appreciated

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The flow is rather nice. I do wish for it to get a little darker or heavier at times, but hey that's just my personal listening taste. With that said though, I'd by happy with a mixed down version of this to play off and on in a chill bass set.

The things that my ear could use a little less of/want more of:

Some of your washes. They seem to add the depth between your bridges/transitions, but also are either overdone or maybe just use rest here and there and a few wash outs?

The asian inspired string/pluck melody. Maybe just switch it up more with a few other instruments.

Dying to get a little more distortion or just to hear that vowely bass sound chopped up more in the tune. Just to give a little more tension.

The tune overall has great structure. Evokes a few emotions, and has a wide variety of instruments to cover the stereo field.

Would love to hear a little more edge in either the drums, or the bass. Hopefully allowing the song to gain solid anchors for the transitions.

Hope any pot this babbling makes sense, and doesn't come off as offensive.

Thanks for sharing.
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Old 28-03-2018, 08:18 PM   #12
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Old 31-03-2018, 01:58 PM   #13
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rally like the song ! especialy the kalimba ingrained within it ! also the off grid wonky first set of arpegiated bleeps, real nice

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Old 02-04-2018, 10:22 AM   #14
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Wow, really digging this. damn. I had a near asmr like experience with one of the voice samples.
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Old 02-04-2018, 10:56 PM   #15
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damn boi, i am really digging the atmospheric vibes here! great sound design and mix as well. how long you been producing?
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Old 08-04-2018, 02:16 PM   #16
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Re: [idm/bass music] NOWFEEL-Tebenasu WIP

Hey strangerflesh ... great tune ... nothing to criticize ... master is also nice ... good work
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Yaas Bruv, yes! Cleaned up nice! Everyting crisp, big ups!
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Old 09-04-2018, 06:54 PM   #18
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damn boi, i am really digging the atmospheric vibes here! great sound design and mix as well. how long you been producing?
Thanks!

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