Originally Posted by Artificer
I like the tune. It's short, obviously, but it's got some neat elements happening. The delay on the percussion is really sweet with headphones and I really like the timbre of the synth at the beginning.
I could use a bit more low-mids in the bass. It was only really present when there wasn't much going on, otherwise it got a bit lost to my ear. I think dialing that in and really nailing would do a lot for the track. I'm also not sure about the synth that comes in around 1:40 - I'd personally have liked something a bit less dreamy. Something with some bite and sharp highs would be where I go with it, but as it trails off shortly after I guess it might develop into something down the road.
How are you finding Logic? I've never actually used it but people seem to really like it. I can only imagine it's a long way from Garageband in terms of functionality.
Also the Soundcloud link in your sig is broken. Might want to fix that.
Awesome, thanks for the feedback!
I'll adjust the EQ on the bass a bit and see if I can get it sounding more noticeable while the rest of the sounds are happening. Yeah, I'm not too set on the synth sound yet, it depends on where I want the composition to go from here, but some bite and sharp highs like you said could make it sound sweet!
So far I'm loving Logic, definitely worth the buy! I've mostly been scratching the surface and finding out where things are and whatnot. It's taken me about a week to get accustomed to it to the point where I can open it up and start putting down ideas relatively smoothly. The only other DAW I've used has been Garageband, so I can't compare it to anything other than that, but so far Logic feels like a good fit for me.
And yeah, I haven't been on the site for a while so I need to fix my sig.