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Old 04-09-2017, 08:55 PM   #1
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[IDM Garage] NOWFEEl-completely Lost

Looking for feedback on this tracks composition, if it's to busy or what changes i could make to increase its appeal. I fucking love it, but everyone I show it to isn't crazy about it and Im wanting to learn why and what I should be more aware of in my writing style. All feedback would really help me hopefully improve my composition skills. Thanks in advance


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Old 04-10-2017, 09:45 PM   #2
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Any Feedback super appreciated

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Old 04-10-2017, 10:26 PM   #3
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I really like this, the atmosphere is really chill and a little melancholy but the beat is glitch and driving. Some of the highs seem a bit hissy to me (particularly the hi-hats and the snare) I especially like the bassline that starts around 3:15-3:20. Very layered and interesting, and has some great dynamics. My only real issue is that some of the sounds need some EQ adjustments. Thanks for sharing
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I really like this, the atmosphere is really chill and a little melancholy but the beat is glitch and driving. Some of the highs seem a bit hissy to me (particularly the hi-hats and the snare) I especially like the bassline that starts around 3:15-3:20. Very layered and interesting, and has some great dynamics. My only real issue is that some of the sounds need some EQ adjustments. Thanks for sharing
Thanks for the feedback I agree, still need going to rework the track a bit and do a final mix down and master . I'll update with the new track when it's all done. Thanks again

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Old 04-12-2017, 11:11 PM   #5
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Last bump . Anymore feedback appreciated, need help with the song

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Old 04-13-2017, 10:26 PM   #6
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i enjoy the fades (in and out) of layers. good mixing on most parts, also i dig the change of instruments. feels plaid-y

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Old 04-14-2017, 03:06 PM   #7
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i enjoy the fades (in and out) of layers. good mixing on most parts, also i dig the change of instruments. feels plaid-y

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Thanks meng I promise to do more, getting a friend in this weekend lay down vocals for the track , Ill post it when its all wrapped up

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Old 04-15-2017, 03:30 PM   #8
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It may be just my preference but I find the drums kind of thin. Perhaps you can add some harmonics to them, by layering some thing extra on top of them.
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I like what you do with the melody and vocals at 3:20!
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Old 04-15-2017, 04:24 PM   #10
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Sounds little muddy to me. Try cut 100hz - 200hz
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Old 04-15-2017, 04:47 PM   #11
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Thanks for the feedback Still haven't mixed or mastered the song , wanted to know that the arrangement was good before I got down to the nitty gritty. Most definitely needs some cleaning up!

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Old 04-16-2017, 12:26 PM   #12
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I really dig your track man! Love the drums, the bass melody and the vocals. Maybe a bit too discordant at the piece starting at 2:32, but not completely sure. Great tempo shift!
Well done!
Looking forward to hear it cleaned up as you said.

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I really dig your track man! Love the drums, the bass melody and the vocals. Maybe a bit too discordant at the piece starting at 2:32, but not completely sure. Great tempo shift!
Well done!
Looking forward to hear it cleaned up as you said.
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Old 04-17-2017, 09:14 PM   #14
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Wow, killer arrangement! Great journey! I agree that the drums sound thin (example: 2:40). The Medium/High hits and not being very effective

Looking forward to listen to the developments!
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It may be just my preference but I find the drums kind of thin. Perhaps you can add some harmonics to them, by layering some thing extra on top of them.
Interesting idea! Novaspire, could you please elaborate on how you would add harmonics to the thinner elements to make them full?
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Old 04-17-2017, 10:19 PM   #16
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Wow, killer arrangement! Great journey! I agree that the drums sound thin (example: 2:40). The Medium/High hits and not being very effective

Looking forward to listen to the developments!
Totally agree, Im still waiting to get a friend in to put new vocals down. Hopefully I can get them in soon! so I can finish up the arrangement and mix. Thanks so much for the feedback

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