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Old 03-28-2017, 05:53 PM   #1
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[EDM Vocal house] Mario D - Far from home

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Im looking for some feedback on track I'm working on right now. Vocal needs resampling, it's very stitched up. Other then that please let me know what you think.

It's original mix

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Old 03-29-2017, 06:42 PM   #2
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Re: [EDM Vocal house] Mario D - Far from home

I am listening on a kinda crappy blue tooth speaker, but I'm not getting much kick or low end in general. Otherwise, I like it. Nice meloncholic track. The energy seems pretty steady throughout, which is fine, I think it would work nicely in the context of a mix.

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I am listening on a kinda crappy blue tooth speaker, but I'm not getting much kick or low end in general. Otherwise, I like it. Nice meloncholic track. The energy seems pretty steady throughout, which is fine, I think it would work nicely in the context of a mix.
Thanks for the input. I'm really not a perfectionist when it comes to the mixing part, or rather, I don't know how to perfect my mix and I'm more less satisfied with a mix i get. Few brushes here and there after you guys hear my mix and thats it. There are a lot of tracks out there on the market, some of my favorites, without perfect mix.
That being said, you guys always help me with that final brushes. I'm almost done with a track.

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Re: [EDM Vocal house] Mario D - Far from home

On my headphones, this sounded great, but I can see what Relic is saying. If you put a bit more mid-bass into your kick and bassline (estimating 100-250 hz), I think that would fix the problem on systems without subs. A little overdrive or saturation in that region might be an easy way to go about it.

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Re: [EDM Vocal house] Mario D - Far from home

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On my headphones, this sounded great, but I can see what Relic is saying. If you put a bit more mid-bass into your kick and bassline (estimating 100-250 hz), I think that would fix the problem on systems without subs. A little overdrive or saturation in that region might be an easy way to go about it.
I've played it a bit, changed mastering, some mix, eq's, volumes. Here is new one. I think that's my final, I doubt I can do better.

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Old 03-29-2017, 10:20 PM   #6
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I've played it a bit, changed mastering, some mix, eq's, volumes. Here is new one. I think that's my final, I doubt I can do better.

I Agree mid bass all the way, sounds thin
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Thanks for the input. I'm really not a perfectionist when it comes to the mixing part, or rather, I don't know how to perfect my mix and I'm more less satisfied with a mix i get. Few brushes here and there after you guys hear my mix and thats it. There are a lot of tracks out there on the market, some of my favorites, without perfect mix.
That being said, you guys always help me with that final brushes. I'm almost done with a track.

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Re: [EDM Vocal house] Mario D - Far from home

I've worked on track more. Here is better mix. Critics welcome.


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Old 04-02-2017, 07:53 AM   #9
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Re: [EDM Vocal house] Mario D - Far from home

Subtractive EQ on your non-bass tracks will help the bass feel bigger (cut some low freqs on your other tracks)... The lows and low mids feel too busy, which is muddying up the mix. Otherwise, I like what's going on in the track. Some smooth vocals you got going there. This track kind of gives me the early 2000s vibe.

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Old 04-02-2017, 11:10 AM   #10
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Subtractive EQ on your non-bass tracks will help the bass feel bigger (cut some low freqs on your other tracks)... The lows and low mids feel too busy, which is muddying up the mix. Otherwise, I like what's going on in the track. Some smooth vocals you got going there. This track kind of gives me the early 2000s vibe.
Thank you. It's not easy to mix this, I've reached my limit. There are around 5,6 different vsti melodies playing at some moments so yea. Next time I'll do better. Track is officialy done.

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