I love that kick. I'm a fan of deep/minimal/techno, so you got my attention. I like the little glitchy open sounds that you used and also that you created something melodic floating over the top, which is something I find that is lacking in a lot of minimal, so I appreciate that.
The only thing that I'm thinking during the track is that I wish there was more sculpting with the elements that remain within the track, stereo field sculpting...automating sounds so they float around in different areas of space more, and it feels even more like the track has taken you from one place to the next.
Also, not a big fan of fade-out outros...
Otherwise, awesome track. Really enjoyed