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Old 11-06-2016, 05:02 PM   #1
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[Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

Hello IDMF
it's been a while since last login. I don't make as much music as I used to due to a spine problem I'm dealing with. It's still fun when I get chance to do some though. Here's something I made while ago. Not my usual style, as usual
Anyway, sharing your thoguhts would be appreciated


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Old 11-08-2016, 10:02 PM   #2
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

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Old 11-09-2016, 12:19 AM   #3
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

I see breaks Im all over it. Nice job,. There's some quality elements in there. I would like to hear a more variation in the production, drums and bassline, some breakdown and rebuild. Keep it at dude.

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Old 11-09-2016, 02:20 AM   #4
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

Beat is not my cup of tea, but all else is super, would be cool to be bit slower, and some subtle beat, 4/4

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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

I think the drums could use a little more smack and the bass line a bit more automation. can you parrallel process in your DAW so you can do tuned distortions and automation layers on you bass?
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

dat base tho.
edit those drums a bit
everything else fits well!
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Old 11-11-2016, 02:46 PM   #8
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

Tight. Tight like Tiger. Except that squelchy bit aroun 3:00. I think it is too different too late in the piece. You could center a break more in the middle around that sound to make the piece more cohesive. The bass is as other have mentioned, great. I +1 the slight variation to it though to keep the interest up. I usually put my bass to the master and secondly to an effects bus to tweaking a new layer ontop of the original sound. It sometimes ends up making a non-base sound but one that flows with the bass, which can add a lot of interest too.

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Old 11-27-2016, 03:12 AM   #9
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

As a consumer of psybreaks I def love the energy. -Could benefit from a buildup!

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Old 11-28-2016, 09:07 PM   #10
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

Yep!

Give that filter on the bassline some more tweaking, and I'd also vary up the breaks & beats a bit more (aside from those glitchy bits at the end of each phrase).

I second that the percussion could also do with fattening up (more compression/limiting & volume).

Loving the squelchiness on those breakdowns.
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

digging it big time. The beat is subtle; although I like it that way. There's not much particularly sticking out in this track that I can hear that really bothers me all that much.
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Old 01-04-2017, 06:37 PM   #12
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

Might be too much going on at certain points but I liked it

I was curious because of the genre tag hehe
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

Thanks a lot people for listening and giving feedback! Always open for some different perspective

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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

The Rhythm gives me goosebumps. DAMN! The bassline ,OMG the bassline. Volume is @ MAX in here
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Old 04-09-2017, 05:39 AM   #15
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

The bassline is catchy as all hell. I see (or hear) that you gave it precedence within the mix for good reason, however I can't help but feel like if it were boomier and quieter, it could have made a better impact.

I think someone else touched on the drums being a bit compressed (or something to that effect) for their taste, and I'd like to echo that. Other than that and the nonexistent ending, the track / mix rules. I've been listening for the past few days and I'm digging it.

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Old 04-12-2017, 06:02 PM   #16
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Re: [Breaks / Retrowave] Raksaed - Retrospectrum

This is sick.

Percussion sounds good. Lots of variety. The melody reminds me of the dirty electro house days, which I loved! Low End could be turned up a bit (or deviate it from the melody) cause I'm not hearing much of it but outside of that the mix sounds perfect so I don't know if you want to mess with it too much.

I guess the only other thing I could say is that I was hoping for a breakdown or something to give it a bit more variety but that's a taste thing and it's your track so I'm not going to try and tell you what to do there!

Overall production is solid. Love it.

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