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Old 08-12-2011, 08:24 AM   #1
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first finished tracks (original mixes)

Hey everyone! So I've been practicing music production for the past 4-5 months and I finally felt ready to create a few finished tracks that I could show off. Criticism would be awesome gracias

Phazers (Original Mix)



Star Stuff (Original Mix)



Welcome Back (Original Mix)

Last edited by YoBroItsMo; 08-12-2011 at 08:45 AM.. Reason: added another track

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Old 08-12-2011, 08:59 AM   #2
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Re: first finished tracks (original mixes)

no big criticism for any of them. the drums on all of them lack some reverb or "air" and i'd get some vocals in the mix, thats what seperating you from other thousands of trance/techno artists lol (no dig intended lol). so yeah get some vocals. eveything else seems ok. doesnt sounds bad, or great, if you know what i mean. keep going and youll develop your own sound

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Old 08-12-2011, 07:48 PM   #3
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yea I agree the drums are a bit too dry. I'm always afraid to incorporate reverb on them since I already use a lot of it on the rest of the track (don't wanna muddy things up) thanks man
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Old 09-12-2011, 10:10 PM   #4
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i agree with meridion, some drum work and some vocals would be dope, but overall good tracks keep pushin

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