[Experimental, Grime, Arca, Shlohmo] Denna - Water Temple (detection Circuit)
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Old 10-08-2017, 07:55 AM   #1
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[Experimental, Grime, Arca, Shlohmo] Denna - Water Temple (detection Circuit)



Any feedback on all aspects of the track would be very appreciated.

I tried to master it myself but couldn't quite get it up to volume....

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Old 10-08-2017, 08:58 AM   #2
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Re: [Experimental, Grime, Arca, Shlohmo] Feedback please

Interesting track. What style is this ?
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Old 10-08-2017, 10:59 AM   #3
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Re: [Experimental, Grime, Arca, Shlohmo] Feedback please

I don't know really.... I guess TBH I was kinda emulating the style of a DJ called Total Freedom, and then within that genre theres other artists like Arca and Lexxi that I was kind of emulating. Looking back on it I think I didn't vary the synth line enough....
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Old 10-08-2017, 11:56 AM   #4
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It's nice, I'd say. It sort of gave me a tribal vibe (the drums in the intro were to note for the vibe), and the effects and synths were spot on to the track. It does really feel like being in a water temple.
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Old 10-08-2017, 04:03 PM   #5
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It's nice, I'd say. It sort of gave me a tribal vibe (the drums in the intro were to note for the vibe), and the effects and synths were spot on to the track. It does really feel like being in a water temple.
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Old 11-08-2017, 09:56 AM   #6
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Re: [Experimental, Grime, Arca, Shlohmo] Denna

Sounds great! Love your composition. Did you try louder bass starting at 2:35?
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Sounds great! Love your composition. Did you try louder bass starting at 2:35?
Oh you mean, you think I should make the bass louder at that part?
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Re: [Experimental, Grime, Arca, Shlohmo] Denna - Water Temple (detection Circuit)

Track flows well. My favourite part is the intro,really like the syle

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Thanks very much for the feedback everyone. Much Appreciated!
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Re: [Experimental, Grime, Arca, Shlohmo] Denna - Water Temple (detection Circuit)

I like whats being done with the drums and the melody isn't super abrasive. I could see females vocals over this. Either microsampled or in verse hook verse format.

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