That's not bad at all..like the arrangement and the quality is pretty spot on, too. The only think that didn't work for me was that intro..it felt like it was a different track altogether..and the way it just died, rather than transitioning into the deeper, main track wasn't the best to be honest. Just didn't work for me..sorry.
But generally speaking, it's a pretty good track and I'd love to hear a longer, more developed version of the same, if you ever get round to remixing this one again.
Thanks for sharing.