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Old 07-07-2017, 03:00 PM   #1
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[IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Here's another tune. This one means a lot to me. I want to be able to make is as good as possible so some help would be lovingly appreciated.



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Old 07-07-2017, 03:55 PM   #2
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Damn man nice deep tune. Shits killers! Love the subject hahahahaha. At first when I was playing through my laptop speakers the panning on the instruments kinda weirded me out, but then I slappin some ear buds and everything fit into place. Great job man!

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Old 07-07-2017, 04:33 PM   #3
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Love the feel and the textures in the percussion. the energy shift at the 140 mark is real cool. I dont really have much to say about the composition just because its kinda of a unique idea and the composition seems to work well for this idea. very cool tune and message

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Old 07-07-2017, 05:33 PM   #4
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

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Damn man nice deep tune. Shits killers! Love the subject hahahahaha. At first when I was playing through my laptop speakers the panning on the instruments kinda weirded me out, but then I slappin some ear buds and everything fit into place. Great job man!
Cheers brother. Love you for that.

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Love the feel and the textures in the percussion. the energy shift at the 140 mark is real cool. I dont really have much to say about the composition just because its kinda of a unique idea and the composition seems to work well for this idea. very cool tune and message
Thank you so much. Yeah, I'm unsure if a whole interview is a thing to do or not? I guess it kinda works on this track.
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Old 07-07-2017, 06:03 PM   #5
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Nothing to say..love it..nice work, J..love it.

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Old 08-07-2017, 02:51 AM   #6
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Nice work man, love the vibe, percusssion, and the samples really add to it, I'd have definitely named the track 'sick since she was six' though haha. But yea, the music really conveys the appropriate mood which is really the main thing surely. The mix sounds nice and I love the gradual evolving with these 3 or 4 key moments where it changes up more drastically, really keeps it interesting. Nice stuff!

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Old 08-07-2017, 08:06 PM   #7
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

This could be in a movie.From where are the vocals?
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Old 08-07-2017, 09:07 PM   #8
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This could be in a movie.From where are the vocals?
It's an interview from Bellevue Hospital for the mentally ill.
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Old 08-07-2017, 10:34 PM   #9
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Very nice track. The vocals compliments the music beautifully and really adds some substance.

I don't have any hints or criticism 'cause I think it works as it is.

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Old 11-07-2017, 08:57 PM   #10
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Needs more cowbell!. Forgive me for not listening to the whole thing, the vocal sample about suicide is a little depressing to me. I really like the percussion, field samples right? Cool sounds.
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Old 11-07-2017, 09:47 PM   #11
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

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Needs more cowbell!. Forgive me for not listening to the whole thing, the vocal sample about suicide is a little depressing to me. I really like the percussion, field samples right? Cool sounds.
Hahaha yeah I never intended it to be an easy listen. Half way through onwards it gets even more depressing! But cheers anyway.
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Old 19-07-2017, 09:22 AM   #12
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Honestly, I wouldnt do much more with it Its amazing right now <3
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Old 24-07-2017, 04:08 AM   #13
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Damn dude, this is heavy. Heavy and with a hard impact. I can't say that I've ever heard a track like this before. I really, really like it. The drop at 3:40 is absolutely on point. I love how the bass kind of whines leading up to it.

The only critique I could possible think of, and this is me really reaching and being nitpicky. I think I would pan the swells in the intro/outro a little less. It sounded good on my monitors but when I put my headphones on it was a bit distracting.

I might also turn down the hihat rolls at 0:55 and the outro a touch, and perhaps put a short reverb on it. But realistically it sounds great as an accent as is.

I love the subject matter and the way you've composed around the interviews. Adding breaks and drops around the speech perfectly drives the point home. I've listened through four times in a row and it sounds just as good as the first time I heard it!

Great job!
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

I could only listen once on my headphones but I'll definitely come back later to give this a proper listen on my monitors. Great composition, nice choice and edit of the interviews, too. Moody stuff. I love it. At first I thought the percussive elements on the intro were a bit dry but expectedly they evolve throughout the track and this is the kind of track that tells a story. Great stuff, thank you.

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Old 24-07-2017, 03:04 PM   #15
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Woah guys, thanks so much xxx
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Re: [IDM/Dub] The Deadly Rhythm - 5150

Such a solid concept!

Only bit of feedback i have is that at times i want the vocals to be a little more in front of the mix.

Absolutely brilliant concept!

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