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Old 25-02-2012, 08:46 PM   #1
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Old 25-02-2012, 10:40 PM   #2
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Re: The most personal track I've made thus far

I can't explain what I find awesome about your tracks. This is pretty awesome though. I'd probably set those harsher samples a bit further back in the mix, but that is a personal taste thing? I like the vocal ...how they are mixed/effected etc...adds a lot to it. Also the kind of non standard structure is cool.

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Old 25-02-2012, 11:07 PM   #3
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Two things didn't sit well with me: The left-panned white noise and the switch at 0:33 which felt a bit disjointed. It did get just slightly too harsh at some moments & I agree with relics comment. Other than those minor points - I also find myself enjoying your music the more I hear. The quieter guitar moments are a pleasure and I love how the noise throws a blanket over it and there's that sense of something trying to claw it's way through.
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Old 25-02-2012, 11:10 PM   #4
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first off i think the first sample needs filtering a bit because when it changes out, the sample that follows sounds completely dislocated, like the tune doesnt glue together as a whole, it feels like a bit of a cut and paste jobby as such.....love the vibe and mood, really dig that type of thing, but it needs some common processing to pull it all together, def some filtering, some bus compression, some reverb and some delay.....the ideas are good man, the mix just needs tweaking a bit...

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