[Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)
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Old 12-09-2017, 11:47 PM   #1
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[Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

So I'm currently entered into this competition and I'm really hoping that this is big break and win or at least come runner up!
Please let me know everything you dislike about this track, even down to the tiny details! This has to be as perfect as it can be by the deadline.

Im still working on making the mastering better but my local studio has been booked out for week, so I can't get a decent master until then!


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Old 14-09-2017, 01:55 PM   #2
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

Finally got round to mastering it!

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Old 14-09-2017, 05:05 PM   #3
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

Checked original version after listening your remix. Quite good work. I like that you made light changes of sound.
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Old 14-09-2017, 06:51 PM   #4
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Re: [Future Trap] Ben Phipps - Mrs. Mr. Feat. Lizzy Land (SODWN remix)

Hey I think this is a pretty nice remix, I am not really familiar with the genre but it sounds pretty good. I am not sure if you are going to make any further changes, but one thing I noticed in the original is that they have a very present and prominent snare that punches through their mix beginning somewhere in their intro. Also, they actually have a moderately heavy beat coming in during their second break down section which adds movement and energy to their song before the beat truly kicks in later.

I think at least, the snare in your mix needs to hit a little bit harder. It is panned a little to the right (?) which is a good thing. I would maybe try layering it with a comparable sound and panning that over to the left a little. Nothing too aggressive. But something to add weight to the snare. Also I would try introducing a heavier beat somewhere in your second break down like they did in the original track. It would not be as heavy as your main beat but heavier than what you have now. Anyways good luck to you!

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