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Old 31-05-2016, 06:49 PM   #1
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[Deep house/Tech house] Airtime - Waiting World

Hi there, finished this track a while back, but what I'd really like to hear are comments from other musicians. I'm quite pleased with the result, but there are also some things I couldn't get right. Can't really put my finger on it, though.


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Old 31-05-2016, 09:02 PM   #2
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Re: [Deep house/Tech house]Airtime - Waiting World

I'd put more low end on the kick. And lower the brass. But, I've got my own mixing issues, that I can't put my finger on(more like a whole hand, actually).So don't, depend too much on my critics
I like the song, the whole ambient took me really in, while I was typing this post.

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Old 01-06-2016, 03:25 AM   #3
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Re: [Deep house/Tech house]Airtime - Waiting World

I really like it for what it is, tbh. The whole song sounds really clean, the ambient noise really adds something to this song and the overall vibes is pretty chill. I like it a lot. It never felt repetitive to me the whole time listening. Good job!

I think the only thing that needs improving is the kick. Either boosting the low end or using a kick that has more thump to it would make it great. Everything else sounds pretty great tbh

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Old 01-06-2016, 05:36 PM   #4
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Re: [Deep house/Tech house]Airtime - Waiting World

Thank you both! Must be something with the kick then, something I always struggle with (probably like most producers). Will definitely try to make it a bit better!

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Old 01-06-2016, 06:38 PM   #5
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Re: [Deep house/Tech house]Airtime - Waiting World

The kick is too weedy.

It doesn't feel nailed to the floor, and the high percs kinda strike all over the place, some of them are really close in the mix, and some are almost inaudible, (it's very hard to tell if a crash ride is even playing or not, or wither it's just high freq artifacts) which is a shame because one or two of them are actually in a lovely place.

I'd say in general, just turning everything to zero, and having another crack at the mix, would do wonders.

And speaking of wonders, the track itself is such a lovely bit of music. Just such a lovely adventure through some sort of proggy trance, deep house sounds, white noise and pearly & marbly Synthetic sound textures.
For the genre that's in it, the synths really go out there with their melodies and little riffs and things, extremely adventurous but always musical and well considered and interesting.


A great track, that needs a 'great' mix, rather then a 'good' mix.

That bassline is sooooooooooooooooooooo good.

Oh P.S. I like all the textures, but I didn't like the machine gunning on one of the hi hats @ 6:01 onwards. The quickest fix is to either try humanize it some way, or just put it back a bit in the mix where it will be skewed a bit through the other hi percs.

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Old 19-10-2016, 02:19 AM   #6
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Re: [Deep house/Tech house]Airtime - Waiting World

Listened the whole track. Like it, but I miss some culmination in this track, I don't mean 'drop the bass', but some emotional culmination. I've imagined what if somewhere in the middle your track's tempo would fall and then the track would become something different with rich basses and so on? If you don't understand what I'm trying to say listen to Nicolas Jaar - Time for us (around 5:20). Anyway, nice track
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Re: [Deep house/Tech house]Airtime - Waiting World

Cool track, nice production

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Old 21-02-2017, 10:15 PM   #8
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Re: [Deep house/Tech house]Airtime - Waiting World

I really like this track man, the whole atmosphere of it sounds good ands very clean!
A more strong kick would also be nice I think, let us now if you change it cause I would really want to hear it! Keep up the good work, gave you a follow on soundcloud!

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