Which is to say, the thing about words is that they draw human attention regardless of what you do. So if the words are the point, that's great, but if they're just the icing, you'll be hard pressed to get people to notice the cake.
I know you probably posted this more for a chuckle than for a criticism session so I'll lighten up and stop with the breaking-everything-down at this point. Just had some thoughts to share is all! Besides, someone or other is bound to disagree with me.
All that said, I really do like your punchy beats.