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Old 04-12-2012, 05:29 PM   #1
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Well I've completed the first draft of this song last night.



I still think it needs some work. For one, I need to properly mix it, as you could probably tell by the waveform. I also need to add more of a dj friendly intro (probably just a couple of bars with the same chord repeating before where the song starts now) and some percussion fills here and there.

I'm not sure I like the bridge either so I might try out something else, I'm thinking of possibly going back to the intro with the sidechained chords and plucks instead?

Either way, I figured I might as well post it up and see if I can get some opinions before I get back to it tonight so yeah, let me know what you think!

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Old 04-12-2012, 05:38 PM   #2
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

Right off the bat, I am feeling the chords man!

HUGE MELODY INTRO!

um the side chain you introduce there or gating is a little much to go from continuous sound to hard gated or sidechained sound. Maybe for that part there filter it in with an auto.

What effect are you using for the tape stoping during the last mix down of your track? DB-blue or Effectrix?

Anyways, Awesome track can't wait till its mixed up and mastered!

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Old 05-12-2012, 05:00 AM   #3
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

Hmm I've got that sidechain comment before so I will definitely be looking into softening it up a bit. I was using glitch and tried gross beat but it didn't sound right so I just used a slide on the bass. I think it might be a little to quiet?

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Old 06-12-2012, 11:31 PM   #4
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Anyone have any thoughts on the bridge?

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Old 06-12-2012, 11:44 PM   #5
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

Great melody mate, sounds clean, seems to be missing something though.

Maybe the low end is lacking a little, lacks a little punch!

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Old 08-12-2012, 08:48 PM   #6
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Hmm thats the second comment I've heard about the low-end/bass. I'll definitely be taking a look.

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Old 13-12-2012, 12:18 AM   #7
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

No comments on the bridge?

I'll update a slightly different version later today (Sidechain fixed, Mixed a bit better)

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Old 13-12-2012, 12:57 PM   #8
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

I like the tune overall – it is well balanced and mixed down well already imo! The only element is the pitched down kick/tom fill/bass slide at the end of each bar after the main drops – its just stops the flow of the tune and would cause some jerks on the dancefloor I reckon. Obviously that’s my personal taste but I would get rid! Good job though Bridge sounds good to me btw
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Old 13-12-2012, 06:11 PM   #10
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

great track !

the best part of the song for me was the intro really got my attention and didn't want to just scroll forward.
The second part i like is the one starting at 1:37 where you used those ' pauses '. i think it really worked in favor of the song and it emphasizes the sounds.This technique is used in many songs and i really liked it.
Great job
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Old 13-12-2012, 07:05 PM   #11
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

Thanks everyone I'm glad you guys like it! Makes me want to get all polished up and finished.

Those pauses/drops caused a dilemma for me because, while I agree they could throw people off, I also like how it makes the track flow.

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Old 15-12-2012, 03:16 AM   #12
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

got the supersaw check
good melody check
The sidechain that kicks in at 1:04 is weid so if you layer snares , or even a different weaker kick drum at that point it won't sound so weird.

And the drop is just not hard... um i can't my finger on it, but it just doesn't hit you know

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Old 15-12-2012, 05:58 AM   #13
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Re: [Big Room] Pat!M - Trinity

The sidechain on the synth misses the first hair of the transient, I would suggest automating volume level separately to skip over those.

The Bridge is super nice, takes you away to a very beautiful place but it is slightly repetitive. I don't think you need to bother with varying the composition, though, just some other automation to create a bit more tension in the build.
Also I would recommend turning down the resonance/Q on the filter that sweeps through the bridge slowly.
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Old 16-12-2012, 12:05 AM   #14
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Yeah I've automated the intensity of the sidechain so that it's not as severe when the supersaw intro melody hits.

I'll re-up the new version in a bit. Still have to do a few things.

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