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Old 05-01-2017, 08:42 AM   #4
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Re: My New Song: Sonorous

Okie doke. You need dynamics, the biggest problem I felt looking over your stuff was a general flatness. Let's take the lead you have in the song you linked here. There's nothing wrong with it, but if you used a more varied volume envelope (it sounds like all you had was the gate, no decay/sustain stage) and did a little bit with the filter, it would certainly stand out more. Even if you did nothing to the drums, and just ducked your pads around them, that would give a sense of dynamics.

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