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Old 14-03-2017, 09:00 AM   #3
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Re: [Lo-Fi,Ambient] BellChainedBodies - Tape Gardens

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Originally Posted by A.M View Post
I really liked that..really did..do.

Just want to suggest you try adding in some sort of found sound in the background..a person talking or laughing..inaudible chatter..kids playing..that sort of thing..and perhaps a simple little melody to complement the rest of the track, played on piano or the plucked strings of a steel guitar..that sort of thing.

As it is, it's good and nice an all..but I feel you could make it better..but that's just my take on it..and you may very well be happy with it as it currently is..in which case you're going to ignore everything I just said..and rightly so.
I'll take it into consideration for future endeavors, as I do with all constructive criticism...

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