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soladb 15-06-2017 09:03 PM

[Breakbeat] Boathemp - Hotdog Party
 
let me know if you guys like it, or if its whack, or whatever


MFXxx 15-06-2017 09:10 PM

Re: [Breakbeat] Boathemp - Hotdog Party
 
For me personally the track starts from 1.33ish onwards get rid of the first half.

Kick could do with more weight, to lite for my break taste but it does fit the track.

Otherwies not a bad effort.

Not diggin it personally as not something I would listen to, however, I get it.

Theres some nice timbres and musical parts in it.

I think its my old adage, "is it dance or soundtrack?"

PS Are hotdogs made from cows?!!! :boss:

Roo Stercogburn 18-06-2017 09:47 AM

Re: [Breakbeat] Boathemp - Hotdog Party
 
This definitely gets better in the second half of the track. I think in part because the first half needs more polish e.g. a tiny bit of reverb love on the drums.

I'd remove the percussion intro before 0:10 and just have the 0:10-0:11 as the intro. Short sharp breakdown, no dicking around straight into the track.

I liked the structure: this goes somewhere rather than endlessly repeating a loop throughout.

I'd probably get rid of everything after 3:30 except the moo. Because everything has built up nicely to that point it feels like a bit of an anti-climax rather than a coda. The moo is chucklesome though. I'm a big fan of the sudden stop in certain circumstances and I think it would work here too.

Quote:

Originally Posted by MFXxx (Post 1449009)
Are hotdogs made from cows?

Great name for a track right there :D


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